Remembrance Day 11th November

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    Wigwam
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      mitch
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        oh wow wigwam i love that, can i ask where you found it.

        #96076
        Avatar photoMike 700
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          Wrote this for Remembrance Day – not to everyone’s taste, Agreed!

          God Bless them all!

           

          Grown men praying Padre did I hear you say
          Not any of my team Padre no sir, no effin way
          Each of my guy’s a trained Killer not a little mouse
          Nah, the women do all the praying in their house

          They’re Special Forces Padre , creme de la effing creme
          Praying is alien to hard barstewards like them
          When ‘Charlie’ attacks us with rifle & a scream
          He’s attacking the top guys , the elite , yes sir, the cream

          Look out Padre there’s some incoming shells
          Cover your ears or you’ll forever be hearing bells
          Look out , look out Jonno ,what the hell is that
          Down by your feet Padre damn, it’s, it’s his head ,still in his effing hat

          Jonno, oh Jonno ,God he’s brown bread
          Lying there bleeding and no blinking head
          Padre hey Padre say some thing please
          I need you to help us, the fear, the tension to ease

          More coming in damn ,Freddy just bought it
          Jesus sweet Jesus please get us out of it
          God what the hell was that , damn I’m getting all hot & sweaty
          Did I post that letter to Dad , and the one to my lovely sister Betty

          Did you see that Padre, Padre wake up, please don’t let go
          Wake up damn you , pray for me and my mate Joe
          Only three of us left and more hell coming in
          Can your God forgive me Padre for my life of sin,

          This may be my last day on your God’s earth
          Wake up Padre pray pray pray for all your worth
          Look, look there , oh God forgive me I pray
          Just let me see my family please, for just one more day

          What the hell is that terrible,terrible smell
          Padre can you hear me oh hell oh hell oh hell
          Here comes Charlie rifle & scream
          He not going get me , top guy – the cream

          ’cause when the going gets tough
          The tough will get rough
          No need to pray Padre, not even now on my very last day
          I don’t need God now Padre i’ve got adrenalin, I don’t need you to pray

          Hell what’s that warm wet feeling down in my gut
          Drifting away Padre going down ?, but
          I didn’t need God I’m a tough Geordie lad
          But I can’t focus can’t breathe , Dad, oh Dad, where are you Dad

          Padre wake up please , Padre just wake.
          Help me find God please before it’s too late
          Don’t know what I’m saying,  but I see a light
          Guide me towards it Padre so warm & so bright

          #96078
          Wigwam
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            I nicked it from here Mitch:

            #96080
            Wigwam
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              #96083
              Wigwam
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                Just read your very thought provoking poem, Mike.  Thanks for sharing it.

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                Avatar photoMike 700
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                  My pleasure, have a good day!

                  #96106
                  Avatar photoPOPS
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                    Thanks for sharing this very powerful and moving image Wigwam, it speaks louder and more eloquently of loss than many a Remembrance sermon.

                    Thanks also for sharing your poetic thoughts Mike, they strike a cord with my emotional need to believe even though it may be outweighed by my analytical mind.

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