When you say: “Sources FleetNews & FT” at the bottom of your post, could you please provide links?
Because it reads like you’re using their content and adding your own viewpoint to it, which isn’t clear for the reader. For example: “Yet is seems the unelected European Commission are still intent on punishing Britain at the expense of EU’s vehicle manufacturers”.
If FleetNews and/or FT used that language, fair enough, I just don’t know what articles you used so can’t find them.
If you had added your own remarks into this, separating the original content from your comments would help.
Thanks.